Final Draft Feedback
Our final draft feedback wasn't as detailed as our first draft feedback as the majority of people had seen the film before, so we wanted to see how we had improved.
1)What is the most significant improvement in our final draft?
The sound- it seems a lot smoother and doesn't change so dramatically, and fits much better.
2) How effective is the use of shooting in the dark?
It is effective for sticking to genre conventions- however some of the shots are too dark and we just don't have the quality equipment to shoot in the dark
3) Could you follow the narrative of our film?
Thought it was a mugging, Eliot's character well developed but Tom's character it was not clear whether he was a protagonist or antagonist
4) Did you like the use of text and fonts in our film?
Titles good, thematic placement good and matched the containment title
5) How could we improve for our next film?
Make sure the characters are seen together
Key parts- More and longer lasting shots!
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